Monday, 25 March 2019

To My Mother- lyric poem(incomplete)

To My Mother
Tortured soul, strength unimagined
You earned your place in the world
Bringing joy, bringing light
To this child's heart
Working hard, keeping peace
Oh mother of mine, dance on
Dance with the divine
Enjoy peace at last


Rules 
Definition:A lengthy lyric poem typically of a serious or meditative nature and having an elevated style and formal stanza structure. A classic ode is structured in three parts: the strophe, the antistrophe, and the epode.

Which Basically means I need to work on this one a lot more! This needs two more stanza's