Saturday, 6 April 2019

A Sestina- Comfort is Needed

Listen to the rain
The sky is in pain
Reach out, offer a hug
Try not to be a bug
Comfort is needed
The ground seeded

The sky is in pain
Reach out, offer a hug
Try not to be a bug
Comfort is needed
The ground seeded
Listen to the rain

Reach out, offer a hug
Try not to be a bug
Comfort is needed
The ground seeded
Listen to the rain
The sky is in pain

Try not to be a bug
Comfort is needed
The ground seeded
Listen to the rain
The sky is in pain
Reach out, offer a hug

Comfort is needed
The ground seeded
Listen to the rain
The sky is in pain
Reach out offer a hug
Try not to be a bug

The ground needs seeded
Listen to the rain
The sky is in pain
Reach out offer a hug
Try not to be a bug
Comfort is needed

Listen the rain is pain
Don't be a bug give me a hug
Comfort is seeded when needed

Rules 
A highly structured form of poetry consisting of six six-line stanzas and a three-line envoy (thirty-nine lines). The end words of the first stanza are repeated in varied order as end words in the other stanzas and also recur in the envoy. Below is an example across three stanzas, the next three would be a continuation of this pattern. I sort of cheated with this first draft but it gives me an idea of what I need to do to make this work

1 A
2 B
3 C
4 D
5 E
6 F

1 B
2 C
3 D
4 E
5 F
6 A

1 C
2 D
3 E
4 F
5 A
6 B

And in the Envoy
1 EF
2 AB
3 CD